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Essay Sample 05

Музланова Е.С.

Музланова Е.С.

Comment on the following statement:

    Some people enjoy living in big cities whereas others find such a lifestyle really harmful.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
- explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position


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Some people think that living in big cities is not good for health, whereas others do not agree. They consider it pretty enjoyable.

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I think living in big cities is exciting. First of all, big cities can offer a person a lot of opportunities for entertainments. There are many of theaters, museums and interesting sights to see there. Second, all new technological things like computers, clothes, cars and so on first come to big cities and then spread to towns and villages. People also earn more money in megapolises so they can travel more.

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At the same time there are people who think that living in big cities is such a shame. A lot of noise, bad air, horrible nature  destroys our health really fast. People work all day along forgetting to live.

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 Well, I am sure that one can find the way to neutralize the bad influence of the city. There are many beautiful parks and gardens in big cities. People can visit an interesting lecture of a famous person or go to a concert of classical music to pacify their minds and feel good.

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In conclusion, I would like to say that it is difficult to find a perfect place to live.  If a place is ecologically friendly, as a rule, there is not much to do there. If it is a big, industrial and polluted city, it usually provides you with numerous options for entertainment. Nevertheless, I still support the idea that big cities are very enjoyable places to live.


In conclusionI would like to say that there are opposing views on this issue. At first sight living in a city seems really destructive but in actual fact it gives a lot of opportunities and entertainments.  Thus, I still support the idea that big cities are very enjoyable places to live.

Read by George William Dole


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