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Essay Sample 30

Музланова Е.С.

Музланова Е.С.

Comment on the following statement:

     Lots of teenagers want to work part-time to earn their pocket money. However, their parents are often against it.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
- explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

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Some people think that it’s good to let teens earn some pocket money whereas others don’t agree.

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I think that it’s not bad for teens to work a little bit. First of all, those teenagers who work can estimate the value of studying. Some students go to school get free education and don’t value it at all. As a result they don’t study well. Second, one should learn how to mange his budget from the very childhood. Otherwise, when a person grows up he can make mistakes that are difficult to fix.

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At the same time there are parents who say that students have to study and nothing else. Any other activity will distract them from studying.

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In my opinion these people have a point. School time is meant for studying and when a student gets good education he can start making money. Nevertheless, some working won’t make any harm. A student can’t study all the time he needs some rest. So it’s better to work and earn some pocket money than to play, say, computer games.

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In conclusion I'd like to say that if we weigh all the facts that support part-time work against the ones that support only studying, we'll see that the facts that support part-time work outweigh those against.


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