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Essay Sample 30

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Comment on the following statement:

     Lots of teenagers want to work part-time to earn their pocket money. However, their parents are often against it.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
—    explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

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Some people think that it is good to let teens have some work and earn some pocket money, whereas others do not agree. They believe that work will distract teens from the learning process and pocket money will spoil them. 

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I think that it is not bad for teens to work and have some pocket money. First of all, those teenagers who work can understand the value of money. Teens usually get everything they need from parents for granted and the only way to appreciate it is to work.  Second, one should learn how to manage their budget from a young age. Otherwise, when he or she grows up they might make some serious financial mistakes that will be difficult to fix.

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At the same time there are parents who say that students have to study and nothing else. Any other activity will distract them from the process of studying.

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Personally, I disagree with this opinion. Doing some work will not do any harm but teach young people discipline. A student cannot study all the time, he needs some rest that can come in the form of a different activity. It is better to work and earn some pocket money than to play, for example, computer games.

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In conclusion, I would like to say that working part-time and making some pocket money is a good stimulus for a person to study better. The world experience has showed that when a student starts to understand how it is not easy to make money, they begin studying much better.

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In conclusionI would like to say that there are opposing views on this issue. At first sight part-time work might distract people from learning process but in actual fact it is a good stimulus for a person to study better. Thus, I support the idea of working partly and making some pocket money.  

 

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A part time job is thought to be a good opportunity for teens to earn some cash. However, their parents often disapprove of this idea. According to the parents, their children have to learn school subjects and having pocket money may distract them from the learning process.

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Personally, I think that it is a good idea to allow young kids to work and make some money. First of all, it gives them a feeling of independence and with it comes more responsibility. It helps them develop their character. Secondly, work makes a person more disciplined. For example, he or she has to go to work in time and do their job.

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At the same time there are people who think that teens are too young to work. They feel strongly that at this age pupils should focus on their educational process and do nothing else.

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I disagree with this opinion because I’m convinced that having a part time job and studying at school can go together without interfering with each other.

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In conclusion I would like to say that there are a lot of activities that can distract teenagers from the learning process and a part-time job is not an exception. Nevertheless, I support the idea of working part-time because it develops their character and make them work on their qualities.

 

Read by George William Dole

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