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Essay Sample 28

Музланова Е.С.

Музланова Е.С.

Comment on the following statement:

     Lots of people believe that the invention of the car changed the world for the better. However, some people think that our world would be better without cars.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
- explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position


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Some people think that cars help people to ease their lives, whereas others do not agree. They think that cars pollute environment, making people's life miserable.

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I think that cars help people a lot. First of all, they make people's life much more comfortable than it would be without them. A person can get around faster, do more important things. Second, people can see their friends more often. Cars also are not only automobiles. They are autobuses, trucks, public transportation and so on, without which we could not live as comfortable as we do.

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At the same time there are people who say that cars pollute environment. Because of cars we breathe bad air, people have become less active and instead of walking they drive everywhere.

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I cannot agree with the opinion mentioned above for a particular reason. Cars’ fumes and their utilization is a big problem now, nevertheless, cars are becoming more and more harmless nowadays. Some of them are running on electricity and do not pollute the nature at all.

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In conclusion, I would like to say that we cannot stop using cars but we can make them less harmful. The advantages of using cars are greater than their disadvantages. So, I believe we just have to adjust our lives to new conditions where cars are used everywhere.


In conclusionI would like to say that there are opposing views on this issue. At first sight our world would be better off without cars but in actual fact automobiles have been deeply integrated into peoples life and help them a lot. Thus, I support the idea of using cars and believe that they will be less harmful in the future. 

Read by Neil Geitz


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