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Essay Sample 08

Музланова Е.С.

Музланова Е.С.

Comment on the following statement:

     Lots of people enjoy different sports. However, there are those who think that sport is not really useful.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
- explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

 

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Some people say that sport is a useful and practical thing, whereas others do not agree. They consider sports a big waste of time and money.

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I think that sport is an extremely useful thing people's life. First of all, sport builds up their character. This quality can be used in different spheres of our life like business, personal achievements, and level of self-esteem. Second, sport is good for one's health if they do it properly. He or she can save a lot of money and time on doctors as well as get a lot of positive emotions.

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At the same time there are people who say that sport is absolutely useless. One should not do sport in order to get all the results it brings. A person should just have a healthy life, that is it.

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Well, life without bad habits is important for people's health, nevertheless, doing sports can make one’s life even better. Sports can strengthen their health, which in its turn can bring a lot of success into people's life.

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In conclusion, I would like to say that we have a saying, “Good spirit dwells in a healthy body”. It is also a scientific fact that those who do sports regularly live longer and healthier lives, since physical exercises increase blood flow and cheer people up. Thus, this all gives me a reason to consider sports as a very useful activity.

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In conclusionI would like to say that there are opposing views on this issue. At first sight sports might seem useless but in actual fact those who do sports regularly live longer and healthier lives, since physical exercises increase blood flow and cheer people up. Thus, this all gives me a reason to consider sports as a very useful activity.

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