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Essay Sample 2

Вербицкая М.В.

Вербицкая М.В.

Comment on the following statement:

    The most important thing in life is family.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
- explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

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Some people say that the most important thing in life is family whereas others say that money and business are more important.

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I think that family is the most important thing in life indeed. First family can support you in times of trouble. If a person has some problems, family members are the first who will come to help him. Second having a family is part of our culture. People need to be surrounded by those who really love them. Without a family we will feel lonely.

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At the same time there are people who think that money is more important. They say that if you have money you can buy support and protection. Knowing that you have money people will be attracted to you and you will never feel lonely.

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In my opinion relationships that are based on money are not real. You can run out of money and all your friends will abandon you. You can buy a lot of things but not friendship. In family you can get real care and love no matter if you have money or not.

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In conclusion I’d like to say that having family and money are very important but if I had to choose one or the other, I would definitely choose family with all troubles and happiness that it brings. Money and riches will come automatically if you really need them.


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