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Essay Sample 3

Вербицкая М.В.

Вербицкая М.В.

Comment on the following statement:

    Childhood is the safest period of human life.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
- explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

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Some people say that childhood is the safest period of human life whereas others say that it’s not safe at all.

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I think that childhood is the safest period of human life indeed. First parents protect children from all the troubles they can get into. Parents feed their children, watch them all the time to make sure nothing bad happens to them. Second society gives children a lot of rights. If a child is being mistreated by the someone the society interferes and makes sure it doesn’t happen again. I also think that it’s a part of human nature to treat children with care and love.

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At the same time there are people who think that childhood is not really safe. Children are physically weak and can get into a lot of troubles. They still know very little about life and can easily put their lives in danger because of lack of experience.

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In my opinion yes children are weak compared with adults but adults are there to protect them. Yes they don’t have enough experience but society is sharing its experience with them.

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In conclusion, I’d like to say that if you look at this question in terms of what the safest period of our lives is investigating this question from different angles and only then add up all the pros and cons, you will definitely see that it’s childhood. A lot of grown-ups dream of coming back to where they were safe and protected, their childhood.

 

 

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