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Essay Sample 10

Вербицкая М.В.

Вербицкая М.В.

Comment on the following statement:

    The most important thing in life is health.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
—    explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

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Some people think that the most important thing in life is health whereas others don’t agree.


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I think there are other more important things than health in our life. First of all, love and family are extremely important. If you are in love, you will feel great and do a lot of good things. For those who are in love life has a lot of meaning. Secondly, good family brings a lot of happiness in one’s life. When one sees loving wife or husband and children he or she becomes really happy.


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At the same time there’re people who say that if you don’t have good health all these values of life will not bring any pleasure. Your consciousness will be always focused only on your body pain.


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In my opinion these people have a point. Good health is a very important part of human existence. Nevertheless, there are more important things. There are healthy people but absolutely unhappy, so how can health be the most important thing in humans’ life?



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In conclusion, I'd like to say that if we weigh all the facts that support health as the highest value of life against love and family, we'll see the facts that support the last ones seriously outweigh health.


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