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Essay Sample 6

Вербицкая М.В.

Вербицкая М.В.

Comment on the following statement:

    The circus is the best entertainment for children.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
- explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

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Some people say that circus is the best entertainment for children whereas others say that movies are better.

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I think that circus is the best entertainment indeed. First I think that it leaves great impressions. I still remember going to a lot of circus performances when I was very young. Second it’s interactive. Children often take part in the performance when the clowns or the host go through the aisles. Children also can see different animals and learn new things about them.

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At the same time there are people who think that movies are better. Movie goers say that movies have a lot of special effects and are more engaging and entertaining.

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In my opinion impressions that we get when we’re part of the show are much deeper. In circus you can see real gymnastics performances and you just want to learn to do the same. You want to learn to juggle and do impressive tricks on the bar.

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In conclusion, I’d like to say that if I had a choice between going to the circus or to the movies I would choose the circus. Going to the circus is an old Russian tradition and I think we should stick to it. Interactivity turns everything into an interesting game.



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