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Essay Sample 06

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Comment on the following statement:

Studying online is more interesting than studying at school.  

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
—   explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

 

 


Pericles, Prince of Tyre


 

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There are people who consider learning subjects on-line more exciting than at school, whereas others say that getting an education at school is the best way to get an excellent education.

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In my opinionstudying at school is the most interesting way to get a good education. First of all, there are a lot of classmates who make the process of education really exciting. For example, when a person studies something in an environment of supportive company the interest increases due to student teamwork. Secondly, the contact between students and teachers is better. For instance, teachers can better see if students learn something or not when they see students face to face. Consequently, teachers can explain course materials most interestingly  in a physical classroom. 

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At the same time there are people who think that studying at school is not very effective because there are a lot of moments of distraction that do not support the class’s educational process. 

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I do not agree with the opinion mentioned above. Distracting moments are cancelled out by the positive spirit that any school atmosphere creates. Students get inspiration from each other as well.

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In conclusion, I would like to say there are opposing view points on this issue. At first sight studying at school might be boring but in actual fact it is more interesting than on-line furthermore it gives a lot of friends' support since students help each other. Thus, I strongly believe that getting education at school is more interesting than online. 

Read by George William Dole

 

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There are people who consider learning subjects at school more exciting than on-line, whereas others say that getting education on the Internet is the best way to get a good education.

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In my opinion, studying on-line is the most interesting way to get a good education. First of all, there are a lot of interesting e-books and educational materials on the Internet. For example, one can learn information from different sourses that actually increases efficiency of the learning process. Secondly, a person can choose convenient times when he or she needs to do studying and not waste time traveling to and from school. Moreover, people can choose a comfortable place to study which helps them focus.

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At the same timethere are those who think that on-line studying is not very good because people may feel that staying home alone without classmates makes them feel lonely and bored. 

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I do not agree with the opinion mentioned above. Classmates very often distract each other from studying. If he or she is absorbed in studying on-line they cannot be distracted or bored.

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In conclusion, I would like to say there are opposing view points on this issue. At first sight studying on-line seems boring and uncomfortable but in actual fact it is more interesting than in a classroom furthermore it creates a lot of opportunities as well.  Thus, I strongly believe that learning things on-line is more exciting than at school. 

Read by George William Dole

 

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