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Essay Sample 13

Клековкина Е., Манн М., Тейлор-Ноулз С., (2004-2012 г)

Клековкина Е., Манн
М., Тейлор-Ноулз С.

Comment on the following statement:

    Most people believe that it's important to look nice. However, some people say that we place too much importance on appearance and fashion.

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
—   explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position

 

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Some people think that looking nice is important, whereas others believe we pay too much attention to it.

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I think that to look nice is important. First of all, it makes a good first impression. A person is more confident if he or she knows they look good. Second, it makes all our social interactions easier because people like us more if we are dressed well or look beautiful.

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At the same time, there are people who believe that we are too obsessed with our appearance. We spend too much time and money following fashion when those resources would be better spent elsewhere. Looks should not play that big a role in our lives.

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Well, I do not agree with this opinion. One cannot disregard their appearance completely. People like to be surrounded by those who are dressed well, more than those who are not, and if one wants to get along with people around, he or she should respect that.

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In conclusion, I would like to say that there are opposing views on this issue. Even though one should not spend too much time on trying to look too fashionable, people should take some efforts to make sure they look nice enough to be pleasant around. Thus, I support the idea of importance looking nice.

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In conclusion, I would like to say that there are opposing views on this issue.  At first sight looking nice seems not important but in actual fact one should take some efforts to make sure they look nice enough to be pleasant around. Thus, I support the idea of importance of looking nice.

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