What is the main problem large cities in Zetland face

Number of respondents (%)

traffic jams

44%

too many migrants

21%

industrial pollution

18%

high population density

11%

high crime rate

6%

Comment on the following statement:

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—   make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;
—   select and report 2–3 main features;
—   make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;
—   outline a problem that can arise with life in large cities for teenagers and suggest a way of solving it;
—   conclude by giving your opinion on why young people prefer to live in large cities.

– make an opening statement on the subject of the project work;

1

(вводное предложение)

Undoubtedly, large cities have a lot of problems.

2

(перифраз) 

3

(разъяснение)

– select and report 2–3 main facts;

1

(1-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

As it is evident from the table, the majority of respondents, accounting for more than one third, consider traffic jams as the main problem.

2

(2-е предложение - инфо. из таблицы)

The next factor is too many migrants.

3

(подтверждение - инфо. из таблицы)

4

(удивление - самое маленькое значение)

Surprisingly, very few people are concerned about high crime rate. The figure stands at 6%.

– make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;

1

(вводное предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Comparing the data given in the table, it becomes obvious that almost four times more citizens in Zetland care about traffic jams than those who worry about high crime rate.

2

(второе предложение + сравнительная конструкция)

Industrial pollution seem less important than too many immigrants. 

– outline a problem that can arise due to the leisure activities preferred by senior citizens and suggest a way of solving it;

1

(вводное предложение + обобщение)

The table clearly illustrates that traffic jams mostly is the main factor that troubles Zetlanders. 

2

(вводное предложение)

3

(сама проблема)

4

(решение проблемы)

One of the probable solutions The possible solution is to ban private cars and introduce more buses on city roads. Thus, it will guaranty a better traffic.

– conclude by giving your opinion on the role of leisure activities in life of senior citizens.

1

(общая фраза)

2

(дать пояснение почему я так думаю)

In my opinion, young people prefer to live in large cities because they have good educational and job opportunities in megapolises. 

3

(обобщение)

All in all, life in big cities is exciting but it can be dangerous at the same time.