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Essay Sample 03

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Comment on the following statement:

Education is the most important possession a person can have.  

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
—   explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position


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Some people think that education is the base of a person’s skills, whereas others do not agree. They consider health is more important. 

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In my opinion, education is the most important attribute that characterizes a successful person. First of all, education is the key to success in life. For example, if someone has a good education, he or she usually gets a well-paid job that allows them to do a lot of interesting things. Secondly, those who have a good education gain respect in society. For instance, professors or academies gain a lot of respect. People listen to their lectures and accept their opinion as the truth

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At the same time there are people who think think that health is the most important thing one can have. Without health a person cannot be happy. 

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I do not agree with opinion mentioned above. Good education broadens one’s mind and opens a lot of doors for an interesting life. People will be bored if they just have a good health. 

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In conclusionI would like to say there are opposing view points on this issue. At first sight education is not very important but in actual fact it makes a person versatile and their life worth living. Thus, I strongly believe education is the most important possession one can have. 

Read by George William Dole