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Essay Sample 09

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Comment on the following statement:

An early choice of a career path is the key to success. 

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
—   explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position


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Some people think that to choose one’s career early will bring success, whereas others do not agree. They consider a late choice of career more beneficial.

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In my opinionthe earlier one choses his or her career the better chances of success they have. First of all, an early chosen career gives one an opportunity to get more experienceFor example, a lot of computer program writers started programming when they were about 7 years old. By the age of twenty-two they have much experience behind them. Secondly, choosing a career path early allows one to focus their education directly on their career specialtyFor example, those aspiring to go into the field of biotech can begin their career training by earning a bachelor's degree in biological science or a related field, including chemistry, molecular biology, or biochemistry. Moreover, it also helps one utilize their school time more efficiently.

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At the same time, there are people who say that the later one chooses their career the more opportunities to be successful they have. The idea is that the more occupations they try out the better they know what they really want.

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I cannot agree with the statement mentioned above. Modern social surveys can easily detect a person’s strongest inclinations without actually trying his hand in different occupations. 

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In conclusionI would like to say that there are opposing views on this issue. At first sight the later one choses their career the more chances for success they have, but in actual fact modern technologies allow children to do this process faster. Thus, I still support the early career choice. 

Read by George William Dole






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