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Essay Sample 03

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Comment on the following statement:

Shopping online is better than shopping in a mall.  

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
—   explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position



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Some people think that buying things online is very convenient, whereas others do not agree. They consider purchasing offline the best way to buy goods. 

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In my opinionbuying things online is more convenient than purchasing in a shopping mall. First of all, it saves a lot of time. For example, one does not need to go somewhere to buy things. Sometimes shopping “by foot” takes hours and hours.  Secondly, online shopping allows people to buy things from different countries. For instance, there are a lot of international shops where people can buy products and receive them in a few days. Moreover, shopping online lets a person go through many more goods and find exactly what they need. 

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At the same time, there are people who think that shopping in a mall is better. They say that one can try on something before buying it but without trying them on people can buy something that they do not really want. 

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I do not agree with the opinion mentioned above. Those who buy goods online, mainly clothes, usually order a few sizes and then buy those items that fit them well. As for fashion, people usually know what they want.

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In conclusionI would like to say there are opposing views on this issue. At first sight, shopping online might seem to be a bad idea but in actual fat it is convenient and saves a lot of time and money. Thus, I strongly believe that buying things online is better than shopping in a mall.

Read by George William Dole






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