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Essay Sample 07

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Comment on the following statement:

Show me your room and I will tell you who you are.  

What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Use the following plan:
—    make an introduction (state the problem)
—    express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
—    express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
—   explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
—    make a conclusion restating your position



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Some people think that the room order and person’s quality are clearly related, whereas others do not agree. They believe that an organized person can live in a messy room.

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In my opinionthe physical order in one’s room reflects the qualities of that person. First of all, tidiness is one of the most important characteristics of a person. For example, if a person has a messy room, he or she usually has a messy or disorganized mental attitude. Secondly, a dirty and messy room says about person's self-respect a lot. For instance, it is a scientific fact that people who do not respect themselves do not gain respect from others. It means that other people will avoid communicating with such a person.

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At the same time there are people who think that a genius with an order inside can live in a messy room because he or she does not have any time for external orders. Their consciousness is fully focused on internal things.

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I do not agree with the opinion mentioned above. Although there are geniuses who can have developed and structured internal world but messy surroundings, they are more the exception than the rule. Usually, people with mess inside also have it outside. 

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In conclusionI would like to say that there are opposing views on this issue. At first sight, order in one’s room and personal qualities are not related but in actual fact, if one looks into this matter deeper, they see a positive correlation. Thus, I strongly believe that after looking at a person’s room people can say who he or she is. 

Read by George William Dole






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