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proverim vashe sochinenie po anglijskomu 2Для многих написание сочинения является сложной задачей. Одна их причин, это отсутствие опыта. Помимо знания английского языка, необходимо еще знать, что писать. Требования к сочинениям весьма конкретные. Вы должны следовать определенному плану. Сначала вы должны перефразировать название. Затем принять определенную точку зрения и привести 2-3 аргумент в поддержку этой точки зрения. Потом вы должны привести точку зрения оппонента. После этого опровергнуть её и сделать вывод. Более подробно о правилах написания эссе вы можете прочитать здесь.

 

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proverim vashe sochinenie po anglijskomu 3 Some people think that we should explore space and visit other planets. Other people say that space exploration is a waste of time and money.

 

soch 001 001 
There are some people who think that we need to explore space and other planets whereas others who think that it is a waste of time and money.

 

soch 001 002
In me my opinion, we should explore space because, first, our planet is dirty and we need to change our location because we will kill our future in the dirty place. Second, we need to make a new galaxy friends for communication and trading. Third, we can help each other.

 

soch 001 003
Others think that this these space explorations are a waste of time and money. First, we can't cannot build a good spacecraft for delivering us to the farest farthest planets. Second, they think that we don't do not need to explore space because we don't do not have any need to travel.

 

soch 001 004
I don’t do not agree with people who think that we don't need to have any explorations to of space. I think we need to know about everything around us including space.

 

soch 001 005
In conclusion, I would like to say that we need to answer all the questions that we have about space.

 

 

 

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proverim vashe sochinenie po anglijskomu 4 Some people think that we should explore space and visit other planets. Other people say that space exploration is a waste of time and money.

soch 001 001 

There are some people who think that we need to explore space and other planets, whereas others who think that it's it is a waste of time and money.

 

soch 001 002
In me my opinion, we should explore space because, first, our planet is dirty and we need to change our location because we will kill our future in the dirty place. Second, we need to make a new galaxy friends for communication and trading. Third, we can help each other.

 

soch 001 003
There are also other people
who think that this these space explorations are a waste of time and money. First, they say, people cannot even build a good spacecraft for delivering us that would get us to the farest farthest planets in our solar system, exploring beyond that is not possible at the moment. Second, they think that humans do not need to explore space because we have enough problems to worry about at home, don't have any need to travel.

 

soch 001 004
I do not agree with people who think that humans do not need to explore space. have any explorations to of space. I think we should try to learn as much as possible about our world and space is part of it. need to know about everything around us including the space.

 

soch 001 005
In conclusion, I would like to say that we need to answer all the questions that we have about space. exploring the other planets and galaxies people learn more about themselves. We understand more about our place in this world, people's purpose in life. Furthermore, it is extremely interesting.

 

 

 

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proverim vashe sochinenie po anglijskomu 5Some people think that we should explore space and visit other planets. Other people say that space exploration is a waste of time and money.

 

soch 001 001

There’re two types of people: those who believe we need to explore space and those who think it is nothing but a waste of time, money and resources.

soch 001 002

I think that clearly people should do space exploration although it is very expensive. At first glance it appears completely morally unjustified to spend so much money on space exploration while people still have people here on Earth dying from malnutrition every day. However, space exploration is mighty important. First of all, it drives people's technology. As a matter of fact, there is another reasonwhy space exploration should be run: people need it if they are to survive as a species. It might seem like a problem of some distant future, but it is only a matter of time before an asteroid big enough to wipe out all life on our planet starts heading our way. Humans must prepare for it now while they still have time.

soch 001 003

However, there are people who believe that nothing good will ever come out of space exploration. First of all it is expansive or people may find an alien race that is much more advanced than human race, and there is no guarantee they will be friendly.

soch 001 004

Actually, I think that people have nothing to fear from aliens. Humans have tried to send long distance signals further into space hoping for a response, but it never came. Chances of surviving of aliens here is very little since our viruses will kill them fast. 

soch 001 005

In conclusion, I would like to say there are opposing views on this issue. At first sight space exploration is a big waste of time and money but in actual fact it can bring a lot of benefit to people. Thus, I strongly believe that exploring space is worth doing

 

 

 

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